Writers on Writing: Neil Gaiman

February 8th, 2010

Speaking of zombies. . .

The first poem that he reads has them. But more important is the central idea that he talks about: the importance of writing and stories.

He’s got a very good point about the state of the short story, a creature that is now mainly housed in literary (college) journals and one or two archaic and monolithic magazines that are too stubborn (thankfully) to die. It’s not only sad, but strictly at odds with the trend in reading these days. Short and interesting should sell well, one would think.

This one is a long one, but if you haven’t heard Gaimen speak, at least hit play. You’ll probably find yourself watching the entire thing.

Author: Dean Categories: Fiction SPR10, Writers on Writing Tags:

Zombies

February 5th, 2010

Recently I’ve been reading As I Lay Dying by Faulkner. It’s a book about how much Dean hates me. I figured out that I need to have some kind of reward system in order to complete it. Read certain amount, reward myself. That kind of thing. So I picked up Cherie Priest’s Boneshaker.

This one is interesting if you take into account the Gardner chapter we just read about “jazzing around”. It is reported as a steampunk book but, generally, in order to be a steampunk book you have to meet a couple basic criteria. One of them is that it has to take place in victorian London, or victorian England. It’s usually London, though. And it has to have, y’know, steam.

This book, however, takes place in the united states, although it is still during the victorian period. Yet we still call it steampunk. Priest is jazzing around with the genre but the reason she will likely get away with it is because she added zombies into the mix. That seems to be the recent trend lately where if you want to do something different, something bold, to cross barriers and boundaries you just stick some zombies into the book and call it a day.

Now, this isn’t to say that adding zombies to a story makes it a bad story. I just feel that it may take away from the long-term appeal of the story or it may detract from some of the more useful elements that will let the story live a lot longer than it otherwise would have. That’s the danger of working within a fad. It’s over-saturated, and you don’t know if your story has what it takes to actually stand out. Is it worth grabbing the attention of mainstream readers? I don’t know. Just a thought.

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Story idea

February 5th, 2010

I’ve been mentally fumbling around with brainstorming and I think I may have found the short story that wants me to write it next (that’s how I seem to work best).

The thing that inspired me was a phrase out of my communication book in a section about semantic theory: “the map is not the territory.” I’ve heard this before, but this time I thought about it in a literal sense.

The story itself would involve a group of road trippin’ American college students (probably lovers, a jacka**, and the practical one… think Scooby Doo) in the desert of the southwest, with mountains, caves, peaks, rivers, canyons, plateaus, foothills, rest stops, and a whole lotta nothin’ to get lost in. For some reason that I haven’t worked out yet, they have a faulty map (or territory, or both). This could be an outdated map, a curse of some sort, or some other type of magic.

I also brainstormed some pop cultural references I might include- another thing I probably picked up from Stephen King. I think it helps to draw the reader in and make him/her feel closer to the story. For this one, stuff like “The Long And Winding Road,” “Highway to Hell,” Oh, The Places You’ll Go, The Road Virus Heads North, and Desperation.

I just need to finaggle a plot!

Author: ladyliterature Categories: Fiction SPR10 Tags:

Story Update Blog

February 4th, 2010

I am using the concept of the Illuminati and the idea of eugenics in the same story as the super- collider. I realize that most of you do not have time to watch two hour films, but if you do have time to watch one of them I suggest starting with Endgame to grasp the concepts that are included in my first person dystopian story. My story has a twist though. It is not dystopia forever and you will see why and readers of my initial post probably already know why and what means, but I am engaging the narrator in his own thought processes and I am allowing his thought processes to grow as time goes on. At first this seemed like a dead end road, but I like the idea of changing a character’s ideas as the character’s knowledge advances. I guess the reader will have to decide if I tackled the idea well enough. Also- this is weird and the only basis I have for its creation is that science has advanced. It is based in the near future in a post- apocalyptic world in which science and artificial intelligence have advanced to a scale that eternally enslaves and mentally programs masses of humans. The humans are “named” which means that every member of the general population is forced to have two microchips (one Verichip, One Neurochip) for tracking purposes and synaptic control over every process that every person can possibly have. There are different levels of programming for each citizen and some of the glitches have not been worked out. If you watch The Illuminati documentary just prepare yourself for a real exorcism (I’m not including this in my story.) Don’t say I didn’t warn you. I would recommend watching Endgame first and then the Illuminati film to understand some of the concepts and symbolism that I am placing into this story. I have changed the Illuminati’s name to the Grand 13 and you will know why I chose this number if you watch the film. The Grand 13 were responsible for the collapse and a massive consolidation of government globally in order to stop the threat of Domestic Terror. Stopping this process results in a massive eugenics campaign that leaves a total of five million breathing humans left in the North American Union. I have changed our planet’s name to Psinucef as well, but the scientist is well aware that it was once called Earth. I am stuck in the middle of the story because the narrator is just realizing that he must bump the world up to the fifth dimension rather than the fourth because the fourth dimension allows for an ultimate and instant form of reality akin to a lucid dream that would instantly cause apocalypse if humans became conscious of their destructive capabilities. Bringing them to the fifth dimension will give them a higher state of consciousness and the ability to think in an autonomous manner. Most of the concepts I am using are somewhere in these films. I highly recommend Endgame first even if you can only watch a few minutes of it.

Idea for sHoRt StOry!

February 4th, 2010

Hey everyone! Well after watching Dean’s post of the Palahnuik interview, it got me thinking about what makes a good story. I liked his ideas about a good story being one that invites others to share their stories, or try to relate in some way. I agree with this, but I also think a good story has to invoke some kind of emotion, whether it be positive or negative. My ideas usually come from people in my life, or situations I have been through, although I do not limit myself to these inspirations only. The idea for my short story came from one of my co-workers, Sally. She and I have developed a very trusting, open relationship over the past year and a half since I started there. She tells me her life stories and I tell her mine. We are also the same age (almost 21 wooo!), which makes it easier for us to relate our stories.

One day, Sally and I opened the store together and had some down-time. She tells me everything and anything and is not afraid to leave out any gory details! She has been through a lot in her life and I really admire her. She is a cancer survivor and has endured many emotional traumas over her life time. That day she told me all about when she had her miscarriage in high school. She left out no details and I couldn’t believe how easily she was able to recollect what happened and share such a personal thing with me. I was so emotionally struck by her story and it stuck in my mind all day. I was filled with sadness and shock and scared that many women actually go through that experience.

Sally knows I want to be a writer and that I write a lot of fiction already, so she joked with me about writing a story based on what happened to her. I agreed that someday I would since the story was so powerful, at least in my opinion. I thought there is no better time than now to share her story, even though it is quite personal. I plan on writing my short story based on what happened to her back in high school and some of the traumatic events she has endured. I’m really excited to start working on this story if only us 407 kids could decided on some details of this creative space!!!! 

P.S. I want to go to awesome writing workshop parties on Thursdays and drink wine and beer like Palahnuik. Not fair! lol

-Abi Apple Bei

Author: AppleBee Categories: Fiction SPR10 Tags:

quotes about writing

February 2nd, 2010

I have found numerous sites with quotes from famous writers about the writing process, tips, and developing a story. Some of them are very helpful!!

literaryculture.suite101.com

www.logicalcreativity.com/jon/quotes.html

There are also quite a few that give tips and reccomendations for writing short stories

jerz.setonhill.edu/writing/creative/shortstory/

www.homepages.dsu.edu/JANKEJ/writing/tips.htm

www.fictionfactor.com/

Renee Martin

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Writers on Writing: Chuck Palahniuk

February 1st, 2010

The interviewer in this one sort of fumbles through the questions, at one point even confusing himself.

I like how Palahniuk defines what a good story is. It’s somehow organic, and I can see that, even with the stories we tell one another without pens or paper or computer screens or blogs. At the same time, he is speaking to the point about marketability and even, on a larger scale, universality.

He also outlines what a typical writing workshop is, outside academia–essentially a small party a few friends who love to write read each other’s stuff and comment on it. There’s really nothing that can compare to it, after the formal classroom setting is no longer available. It keeps you writing, and it provides a sounding board of honest people interested in craft.

Author: Dean Categories: Fiction SPR10, Writers on Writing Tags:

R.I.P. Salinger (edited to include writing views)

January 29th, 2010

As I’m sure most are aware, Salinger has left us at the age of 91. I did not know this until this afternoon. So when I mentioned Salinger in class today, I was thinking he was still alive. How tragic to find out otherwise! And this, the very week I had decided that Salinger might be my favorite short story writer. I’ve been reading him for the past week straight, having no idea he was going to die anytime soon. How terrible. Just last night, I was printing out pages and pages of his uncollected stories (because you can’t BUY them). As the ink was bleeding out onto the page, Salinger very well might have been bleeding out into his bed. (I’m just being dramatic here, but you never know.)

I was just telling my friend this week that it’d be great to have all his uncollected stories published in one volume, so people can actually read them for the first time in 50 years. But I didn’t mean I wanted him to DIE! This is all so sad to me…

Anyway, the class will have the privilege to read his most famous short story, “A Perfect Day for Bananafish,” soon. However, he hasn’t really said anything about writing, as far as I can find.

It’s obvious that Salinger considered writing an extremely personal thing. He’s said to have kept writing regularly since 1965, but nobody has seen any of it. He writes for himself, and nobody else. I wouldn’t say this is a good thing, though; he was simply an eccentric and reclusive man. But I do agree that writing in a very personal manner could bring great benefits, although it isn’t required.

He does hate movies, though. Here’s what Holden Caulfield, from Catcher in the Rye, says about his brother, who moved to Hollywood:

“Now he’s out in Hollywood, D.B., being a prostitute. If there’s one thing I hate, it’s the movies. Don’t even mention them to me.”

Only one movie based on his work has ever been allowed to be made. And Salinger despised it.

So his views on writing aren’t very helpful to us. But one of the best ways for an aspiring writer to learn how to write is to READ Salinger. He had an endless imagination, unforgettable characters, some of the best dialog ever put to print, and the kind of high, dark comedy that makes you breathless with belly laughs and tears.

He will surely be missed. Goodbye, dear J.D.

Editor’s note:

Hello again. Reading Salinger’s Seymour – An Introduction, which is a novella about Buddy Glass’ (a fictional character) fictional brother Seymour. It’s written in a sort of free form diary manner, with hundreds of absolutely hilarious digressions and anecdotes. Much of the “story” talks about writing. Here are a few tidbits. One can assume that Salinger might agree with some or all of it.

“When was writing ever your profession? It’s never been anything but your religion. Do you know what you will be asked when you die? But let me tell you first what you won’t be asked. You won’t be asked if you were working on a wonderful, moving piece of writing when you died. You won’t be asked if it was long or short, sad or funny, published or unpublished. You won’t be asked if you were in good or bad form while you were working on it. You won’t even be asked if it was the one piece of writing you would have been working on if you had known your time would be up when it was finished. I’m so sure you’ll get asked only two questions. Were most of your stars out? Were you busy writing your heart out? [...] If only you’d remember before you ever sat down to write that you’ve been a reader long before you were ever a writer. You simply fix that fact in your mind, then sit very still and ask yourself, as a reader, what piece of writing in all the world (insert your name here) would most want to read if he had his heart’s choice. The next step is terrible, but so simple I can hardly believe it as I write it. You just sit down shamelessly and write the thing yourself. I won’t even underline that. It’s too important to be underlined. Oh, dare to do it, Buddy! Trust your heart. You’re a deserving craftsman. It would never betray you. I think I’d give almost anything on earth to see you writing a something, an anything, a story, a poem, a tree, that was really and truly after your own heart.”

“It’s a wonder we’re not worse cowards in print than we already are.”

“I believe I essentially remain what I’ve almost always been — a narrator, but one with extremely pressing personal needs. I want to introduce, I want to describe, I want to distribute mementos, amulets, I want to break out my wallet and pass around snapshots, I want to follow my nose. In this mood, I don’t dare go anywhere near the short-story form. It eats up fat little undetached writers like me whole.”

“You can’t imagine what big, hand-rubbing plans I had for this immediate space. They appear to have been designed, though, to look exquisite on the bottom of my wastebasket.”

“You can’t argue with someone who believes, or just passionately suspects, that the poet’s function is not to write what he must write, but, rather, to write what he would write if his life depended on his taking responsibility for writing what he must in a style designed to shut out as few of his old librarians as humanly possible.”

“Fundamentally, my mind has always balked at any kind of ending. How many stories have I torn up since I was a boy simply because they had a Beginning, a Middle, and an End? One of the thousand reasons I quit going to the theatre when I was twenty was that I resented like hell filing out of the theatre just because some playwright was forever slamming down his silly curtain.”

And one interview quote:

“There is a marvelous peace in not publishing … I like to write. I love to write. But I write just for myself and my own pleasure. [...] I see publication as a damned interruption.”

Author: man-o-steel Categories: Fiction SPR10 Tags:

speaking to the dead through dreams

January 28th, 2010

I ahve another idea for a story about a girl who loses her fiance in a freak accident, but their love is so deep that they are able to communicate through dreams and symbols. I have read a few Sylvia Browne books that discuss this phenomena. Also, the book which was later turned into a movie entitled “Of What Dreams May Come” (Great Movie !!!) also touches on this idea.

Renee Martin

http://www.ehow.com/how_2308648_talk-dead-people-dreams.html

http://dreamstudies.org/2009/10/29/visitation-dreams-when-the-veil-between-worlds-is-thin/

http://search.barnesandnoble.com/What-Dreams-May-Come/Richard-Matheson/e/9780765308702

Author: marti084 Categories: Fiction SPR10 Tags:

What’s In A Name?

January 28th, 2010

Lately, one of the hardest things, for me, is coming up with character names. In some cases, the name just comes to me, but now I feel like I’ve just got no clue what to name my main characters!

Like other writers I know, I use babynames for a lot of my naming woes, but are there any others out there that you guys would recommend? I want to be able to come up with unique names, and not just reuse names I’ve used in other stories.

What do you guys suggest?

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