Freak Thoughts

I have found this remarkable story by Anton Chekhov as I was attempting to find stories to help build my short story skills. I find the dialogue to be remarkable, thoughtful, and realistic. It is attached and can also be found here.

http://chekhov2.tripod.com/183.htm

An artist’s Story

First of all I would like to thank all of you for your helpful comments and for suffering through my dilapidated story with a rushed and distastefully devious ending. Here is my idea for Husher.
Even in the most remote of mining towns this destructive force awaits. No lives are spared and no holds are barred. Initially there are several environmental hazards in the mining town to all residents. The town is led to believe that their coal production has rendered them responsible for the atrocities committed unto the respiratory, endocrine, and nervous systems of every community member. Little do the puritanical yet rigid men who struggle for a livelihood know that terror awaits them. Every village shall be slashed and burned.

My inspiration for this song is the Megadeth song “How the Story Ends.”

Far off on the horizon you can barely see their torches
But rest assured they’re out there and they’re coming
If you listen, the sound is growing nearer of infantry
Marching out a hypnotizing rhythm

Destroying every town, light it up and burn it down
You may not like it now, but this is how the story ends

Above the ring of clashing steel, they raise flags of war
A sign to all the warriors who cannot hear
Amidst smoke of cannonballs, they bang the drums of death
Pound a cadence out for those who cannot see

Destroying every town, light it up and burn it down
You may not like it now, but this is how the story ends
Poison the wells and scorch the earth, everything’s slashed and burnt
You may not like it now, but this is how the story ends

Acoustic Solo – Dave
Solo – Chris

Destroying every town, light it up and burn it down
You may not like it now, but this is how the story ends
Poison the wells and scorch the earth, everything’s slashed and burnt
You may not like it now, but this is how the story ends

Little do they know that the town’s water supply has been deliberately poisoned causing maladies ranging from mental illness, and an upset stomach, to birth defects and mutations in the genome. The residents of Husher work extremely hard at the expense of their own health in order to make a living. They are told that all of their symptoms are due to complications from the coal, but the truth is that their water has been deliberately spiked in order to dull their mental capacities and make them servile. Who are the destroyers? They are simply a nationalistic group with perverted ideals using diffused responsibility as an excuse to destroy. They may be serving someone else’s goal or purpose but they are oblivious to this fact and only know the mob mentality that creates their acts of senseless violence and about the bonuses they receive for wreaking havoc. This group has pledged to be medieval revivalists that believe in total slaughter. The onset of this situation is gradual, but the decaying and servile state of the town prevents any perennial groups from forming and spreading the truth about the high level of heavy metals and antidepressants in the water supply. The town is hard working, and they have already endured an enormous amount of suffering, but they have no idea that the carnage and destruction has only begun. By the time the residents of Husher realize what is going on in their town it is too late. They are conservative, but some how they bought into total gun control ( they gave up their guns willingly) This cannot possibly be due to the poisonous and infectious agents that are being dumped quite regularly in the water supply. On top of this there is estrogen and other hormones in the water so if the poison doesn’t get them the hormones will. Husher was once a town where children swung on swings, biked to the park, and played football regularly. As the air quality declined and the soft kill of the town increased the residents became increasingly sedentary. This paved the way for the town of ‘compassionate conservatives’ implementing a gun ban that reflected the state of Nazi Germany. The persecution was only one breath away. This is the story of the Husher Holocaust. It is just one of a string of groups that decided to mass murder due to their extremely warped mental states and the condition of diffused responsibility for the killings of all of the parties that fell victim to these vicious and unforeseen attacks. There was nobody to offer warning. If there were there would have been no one to listen to them. Soft kill weapons in the water supply at this amount have caused extensive brain damage in all of the citizens of Husher.
I know this may sound political, but it is intended to be a story of the decimation of this town that has no evident political or moral message. It is an example of total destruction.

I have changed the style of the Cthulhu Mythos, in a manner that I hope works well with this course. I am close to finished but I don’t really want to give it all away at first. Does anyone know if it is legal for me to use the names Cthulhu and the book name Cthaat Aquadingen as long as the story is my own? This is precisely what I have done. I have attempted to make the story slightly more mundane than some stories in the mythos, but holistically it is not devoid of imagery that I hope I have done well with. I have not fully finished at this juncture so I don’t want to rush to any sort of interpretation of the text at this moment. I am nearly finished, but the story definitely needs tending to. I must leave you for now. My destiny awaits me.

I would like to write a story about an introverted teenager and what social relations the individual actually does have. In addition to this I want to focus on the teenager’s thoughts more than his spoken words. When the teenager feels the need to keep quiet or feels unable to speak I will focus solely on what he is thinking in addition to his surroundings. I am not fully an introvert, but I do find myself in situations in which I do not want to talk and others always attempt to make assumptions in regards to reasons for this. My (least) favorite ones are, “Are you alright?” and “What’s wrong?” This is due to the fact that there is usually nothing wrong when they ask me this but the very question is annoying to me. When they ask this and there is something wrong I usually don’t want to talk about it anyways. I do have this look on my face that makes things look like something’s wrong when many times I am really just fine or zoning out. Oh well. It doesn’t matter how many times I ask people to stop asking these b.s. questions; they never do even though I’m not fully an introvert. I guess I am what people would call a selective introvert. It works just like selective hearing except it is not always a conscious decision. It comes about from a certain (more tired usually) state of mind being bombarded with trivial questions. People who know me know I can be loud just as much as I can be quiet, but in this story I want to focus more on why the teenager is an introvert and the sometimes unexplainable nature of this phenomenon. I want to go right inside his head while also focusing on the details of where he is, what he is doing, and how he reacts. I want to make a story in which silence becomes lively (through thought.) Through his thoughts I would like to convey the character’s imperfect yet persistent personality and all of the troubles and hardship this quiet nature can cause. I may want to propose the introversion as a natural state of mind that is irreversible, or I may want to focus on how this character grows to overcome his introversion. I am still uncertain of all the details but I need to start brainstorming and writing story maps like I haven’t done for quite some time because this creates the ability to make the story full and cohesive rather than starting a story I only hope to finish which has been a bad habit of my attempts as of lately. I shall overcome this through mapping out my story for once. I again realize the essential nature of actually planning the story.
The following song did not exactly inspire this idea but it did come to mind when I thought to write it. It is one of my favorite Shadows Fall songs of all time and it is slower you you can probably handle it even if you’re not a metal head. Here are the lyrics.
Shadows Fall- The Art of Balance

I am sheltered by this apathy
Nothing left to do but torch the day
Retreating deeper into my mind
What is it that i hope to find?

This is the aftermath in me
Tendency to keep it all inside
A fool’s disguise

I am strangled by this sympathy
Empty words with no meaning
Must release myself into the void
All illusions must be destroyed

This is the aftermath in me
Tendency to keep it all

How dare you compromise
The balance of our lives
Excuses you devise
An internal suicide
I struggle to survive
A perfect goal for which to strive
Ignorance cannot disguise

The balance of our lives
Hiding the meaning of
Hiding the meaning of

Feel free to offer me any criticism of this intended form or ideas to help the story seem as realistic as possible/ easy to follow. Thanks.

Reading James Fenimore Cooper has made me want to write an alternate history of the United States. Yes, I am proud to be an American. No, I am not proud of some of this country’s past and present. I want to write an alternate history piece in which the Native Americans won the initial strings of battles for the conquest of their land. They were the rightful owners and did not view it that way. I also want to give them extraordinary medical capabilities so they can become immune to the diseases that are spread both intentionally and unintentionally. I want their children to live, and never for them to be hanged in the number of thirteen. This will happen once and only once. The great spirit will show its dark side. The natives will use their immense knowledge of their own terrain to outsmart the assailants and steal their weapons. This is the story that would have been written as history if someone could have warned them. No, they befriended the whites and helped them survive. The same goes for the Spaniards who read them a proclamation in Spanish which they “had no hope of understanding” (Source: Corporate Avenger.)
and in effect meant this. There are several translations and this is the one in the Corporate Avenger song.
“We ask and require you to acknowledge the church as the ruler and
superior of the whole world and the high priest called pope and in his
name the king of Spain as lords of this land. If you submit we shall
receive you in all love and charity and shall leave you, your wives and
children and your lands free without servitude, but if you do not submit
we shall powerfully enter into your country and shall make war against
you, we shall take you and your wives and your children and shall make
slaves of them and we shall take away your goods and shall do you all
the harm and damage we can.”
I want the Natives to win. I think our society would have been more peaceful and moral had this land never been stolen. The great civilaization that already existed in North America.

This is 100% true and so are the gruesome details (which I will post here) in the song (which I won’t post here. Instead I’ll give you a different song so no one gets offended. Here’s the gruesome details.

“The Spaniards made bets as to who would slit a man in two or cut of
his head with one blow. They tore babies from their mother’s breast by
their feet and dashed their head against the rocks. They hanged Indians
by thirteen in honor and reverence for their redeemer and their twelve
apostles. They put wood underneath and with fire burned the Indians
alive.”

This time around the natives would be able to defend themselves because there will be a Paul Revere type in the natives who discovers the plan for conquest initially. This causes the tribes of America to unite in battle as one tribe.
Another Corporate Avenger song (Evolved) states
(I would indent but this is a post)

“Indians are not chinamen, some books contain lies.
If man had evolved from apes, there would be no more apes.
It has been said and written over and over again that the first north
Americans crossed on a land bridge from asia into the north America due to
exposed land which occured during the low sea levels of the last ice age.
It has been said that there is no historic record of these early pioneers the
last of which crossed supposedly at 10,000 years ago, even though great
civilizations, with great structures already existed in north and South America.

If man had evolved from apes, there would be no more apes.
Oh, the truth feels good.
All this is quoted as fact with absolutely no consideration to the common
sense notion that as an ice age recedes it does so from the warmest parts of
the earth around the equator, to the north and to the south towards poles.
This grear land bridge theory subliminally suggest that the people who were
native to this land were not native at all but mere descendants of immigrants.
If man had evolved from apes, there would be no more apes.
Oh, the truth feels good. ”

I would like to take this interpretation of the history so I can emphasize the strength of all of the tribes conjoined. It is their great civilization. North America will help South America and vice versa to eradicate the genocidal, parasitic and destructive evil from the face of their great union that requires no laws, boundaries, or borders. This land does not rely on treaties that become broken but on mutual respect and symbiotic relationships. This inner strength will assure the ultimate victory of the natives. They are no longer cornered or isolated. Sure they lose some battles but they have enough immunized men to fight forever! The battle is on!

I do not think war is right but I do believe that self- defense is a God given right to every organism on this planet.
(My main focus is making my story as realistic as possible this time around. The sole basis is not morality or absurdity. It is an alternate reality.) The link below where the text is underlined and talks about the RATM video is a link to the Gutenberg text detailing the initial destruction inflicted upon the natives.

I would like to use free energy in more detail than in the story I have posted. This may include refining this story in order to make it more believable. The miraculous elevator was said to be run through free energy but I did not do a thorough enough job of explaining how this technology is possible. Obviously the technology is more advanced than the admitted technology today because any device that might provide cheap energy would probably weigh down an elevator in these times. I need to explain how it was that technology had gotten this far or what characteristics of this other planet that exists in relation to potentials rather than actualities. I may choose to write a whole other story pertaining to free energy that might provide more detail. I want to write something that emphasizes the madness and genius of an inventor that has followed the path of Nikola Tesla and has translated it into their own modern energy science. This alarms the ‘global elite’ because it threatens their energy monopoly. This would be along the lines of a biography of a modern day Tesla. This time the people will win as I splice in my cheesy moral message that will detract ever so slightly (or largely depending on how I feel) from my piece. Yes, deal with it.
I really want to write about fantastic concepts, but my last two attempts have shown that I must go back and practice the basics of simplistic stories and examine the reasons for which they are sensical and believable. I have a tendency just to jump into the extraordinary and I sometimes leave readers in the dust. I will try to further develop my skills to make my works believable, but I also want to write about fantastic things as well.
Hopefully with this tale of a mad electrical experimentor/ inventor I can bring my stories back down to the earth and start with that point.
(My fiction writing is rusty. I haven’t completely finished a short story since high school I think – before these last two attempts)
I will try to make the piece more believable than my last two, but I still want to use technology that is more advanced than what is admitted currently. I will explain this man’s process of inventing and his inventions. His intention is to free mankind from the slavery of energy dependence and to provide free energy to every person on the planet.
The last piece I did was believable until the point that the free energy elevator just shot out of the guy’s house and went into outer space. I may choose to work with this piece to develop some alternate endings or to piece the fantastic events together to make them sensical and believable.
The story with the inventor will be helpful in bringing back my sense of the illusory cause and effect process.




I am using this guy for inspiration. I would like to progressively map his psychological processes while at the same time focusing on the vastness of the relevance of his (my character’s) realtion to the outside world.

Part one RATS

I realize that this is not perfected yet and that there are some tense issues. I appreciate any comments and the pointing out of flaws / incorrect tense will only help me. This is in its first stage but I believe it has potential. What is the actuality? You will have to read to find out. Thanks.

I am somewhat scared by this piece and I believe to have already caused my father to have become ‘possessed’ a couple of hours ago. Evil stories like this are nothing to play around with. This story is about a psychopathic serial- killer who believes himself to be the only communicator with the evil deity Jabulon which he believes that he is actually a part of. I took the name from the below description.

The story is right here.
Lord of Deception Jabulon= Jah-Bul-On

Please comment and let me know if this story works so I can work on my technique if that is needed. (I know there’s always something to work on.) I really don’t want to write anymore blasphemous stories though. This one is seething with evil energies and the the reader must beware. Heed my warning. If this piece causes illness or possession it is strongly encouraged that you consult a physician, a priest, or a shaman immediately to heal yourself, balance your energies, and exorcise the most evil entity known to mankind. Thank you for reading.

The Haunted House that collapsed in the “Treehouse of Horror” also spoofed the House of Usher. Matt Groening also spoofed Stephen Knig’s the Shining. It’s no wonder why most Americans can name Simpsons characters but do not know their rights. The Simpsons Rule!
You can find info about the poll at

http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/americas/4761294.stm

The article is entitled “Simpsons ‘trump’ first amendment.” The Simpsons are good, but come on! Know your rights!

I am using the concept of reptilian shapeshifters who are the Grand 13 (the illuminati), and I am also working under the assumption that some biblical references are referring to reptilians. I haven’t worked in any shapeshifting as of yet and I am uncertain if I will do so, but I have exposed the Grand 13 for who they are in this piece. When watching these videos, which I haven’t seen for awhile, I realized that there are a lot more things about this I could work in to make it more believable. I am unsure at this point if the grand 13 will remain unseen or if they will show themselves. Will they even exist once everything moves into the fifth dimension? I am not yet sure. I may leave their visual appearance out of this piece or I may insert it, but I would definitely like to describe these creatures in detail in one story or another. As Credo Mutwa the Zulu Shaman says this race of reptilians are responsible for all wars and this is the reason that they were responsible for the final American Revolution in which they funded both sides and this is the reason for their Endgame dehumanization process. They feast upon pain, suffering, agony, and fear. They also feast upon human flesh sometimes. In my intial story thay are thus far the unseen perpetrators of all of the horrors of the North American Union of the future. If whatever I saw when I was young was “real” then this must be what it was. . . or I could have been very open to suggestion. . . or very impressionable. . . but it’s no wonder that I am into this stuff. I don’t necessarily believe that it is all 100% true, but I find it very interesting. These videos that you are about to watch are of the conspiracy theorist David Icke interviewing the Zulu Shaman Credo Mutwa. Credo learned the secrets of this race of reptilians and their African secret society by. . . arghhh. . . going through an initiation that involved. . . ughhh. . . eating a stew made with a human hand! If this guy is telling the truth about that then I really wouldn’t doubt that this stuff might have some factual basis despite the lack of the perfect empirical evidence. Some might claim that the bible and ancient Egyptian mythology are proof but they do not exactly prove it empirically. The reptilians are heartless and only have an R- complex- the most ancient part of the human brain. According to credo the chitauri (the earth’s reptilains) are sexually compatible with humans so this would mean that they are part of our ancestry and that their species is part of us; they are the original source of our most primal instincts and our tendency for ritualistic behavior within our daily lives (repeating some of the same activities daily that is.) According to Mr. Icke’s theories the reptilians cannot experience the level of emotions humans can because they possess no mammalian or neo- mammalian brain. There are a lot of questions about life on this planet that still cannot be answered and though many disregard them I believe an open discussion on this subject matter should be commended rather than disregarded. – Oh and I am using them in more than one story. That Stephen King story made me almost want to relive my experience in story form despite the fact that I was scared out of my mind. I do know this- It was not someone in a costume- whether or not it was a living creature or something I only perceived- I do not know. I think I will create a fairly short story that describes my experience and the detail that I remember of it and I will add a few features of the chitauri that I did not see on the ‘creature’ or whatever this manifestation happened to be. Maybe Credo is right. Maybe the Chitauri are for some reason showing themselves in this time period to prepare for their open conquest or maybe even something bigger. Maybe all of this planet x/ Nibiru stuff has a real foundation and will change the way we live forever. . . who knows. If I choose to use planet X in a story it will be a different one and I will write another blog about it if I do. Thank you for your time.

Is this true?. . . Who knows?

All probability suggests that there is other intelligent life in the universe, but none of this really proves that they have reached earth. It does imply it though. I really don’t know what to believe out of all of this, but I do know that it helps make for a good story!