Freak Thoughts

This was the inspiration for my story, “Black Jade.”  It’s a clip from the Criminal Minds episode called “The Angel Maker” where a serial killer is thought to be still alive.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6nyeFPYMmDM

I’m working the beginning of my story so that the background will be told through flashbacks more than an info dump.  I was just wondering if there are any suggestions on how to incorporate them effectively.  Thanks!

A couple of people mentioned that the title of mystory “Black Jade” didn’t fit.  After reading it, I was wondering if there were any suggestions you guys had that I may try to see if another one would fit better.  Thank you!