I would like to thank all of you for your help during my workshop day. And it was fun reading all of your stories.
If you continue to write and need some critique, feel free to email me your work. Best of luck to all of you.
Yea, so I’m close to being finished editing my short story. I’ve fixed all the grammar and punctuation errors I made in the first draft; which by the way I didn’t realize I had so many. But the last thing there is to be done is fixing the ending. When it was my workshop day a few of you mentioned that the ending cancelled out everything that Tech had done to stop his violent nature. But I do not know where to start to change the ending. If you have any suggestions, please by all means comment.
My story was the one from the guns point of view.
I was brainstorming on different topics for my next story. One of my options is to write a story where the story is going to be based on the protagonist flashbacks. But I was wondering how to differentiate the flashback portion of the story from the rest of the narrative? How can I transition from the flashback to the reality without confusing the reader?
I would appreciate any suggestions.
I’ve been meaning to upload this for awhile. But didn’t know how to post until now. This is Tupac’s song, Me and My Girlfriend, which I used for my story. I notic ed that most of the class never heard this song, so I decided to post the link. There is a lot of cussing in the song, I thought you ought to know.
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