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February 4th, 2010

I am using the concept of the Illuminati and the idea of eugenics in the same story as the super- collider. I realize that most of you do not have time to watch two hour films, but if you do have time to watch one of them I suggest starting with Endgame to grasp the concepts that are included in my first person dystopian story. My story has a twist though. It is not dystopia forever and you will see why and readers of my initial post probably already know why and what means, but I am engaging the narrator in his own thought processes and I am allowing his thought processes to grow as time goes on. At first this seemed like a dead end road, but I like the idea of changing a character’s ideas as the character’s knowledge advances. I guess the reader will have to decide if I tackled the idea well enough. Also- this is weird and the only basis I have for its creation is that science has advanced. It is based in the near future in a post- apocalyptic world in which science and artificial intelligence have advanced to a scale that eternally enslaves and mentally programs masses of humans. The humans are “named” which means that every member of the general population is forced to have two microchips (one Verichip, One Neurochip) for tracking purposes and synaptic control over every process that every person can possibly have. There are different levels of programming for each citizen and some of the glitches have not been worked out. If you watch The Illuminati documentary just prepare yourself for a real exorcism (I’m not including this in my story.) Don’t say I didn’t warn you. I would recommend watching Endgame first and then the Illuminati film to understand some of the concepts and symbolism that I am placing into this story. I have changed the Illuminati’s name to the Grand 13 and you will know why I chose this number if you watch the film. The Grand 13 were responsible for the collapse and a massive consolidation of government globally in order to stop the threat of Domestic Terror. Stopping this process results in a massive eugenics campaign that leaves a total of five million breathing humans left in the North American Union. I have changed our planet’s name to Psinucef as well, but the scientist is well aware that it was once called Earth. I am stuck in the middle of the story because the narrator is just realizing that he must bump the world up to the fifth dimension rather than the fourth because the fourth dimension allows for an ultimate and instant form of reality akin to a lucid dream that would instantly cause apocalypse if humans became conscious of their destructive capabilities. Bringing them to the fifth dimension will give them a higher state of consciousness and the ability to think in an autonomous manner. Most of the concepts I am using are somewhere in these films. I highly recommend Endgame first even if you can only watch a few minutes of it.

  1. Emily
    February 6th, 2010 at 01:34 | #1

    It sounds very intesting. Just make sure to keep your information steady so the readers don’t get confused. Other than that, I can’t wait to read it!

  2. Dean
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:26 | #2

    Combined with the information in your last few posts, it sounds like this wants to be longer than a short story. Are you thinking writing big and cutting? Or maybe writing a story that grows?

  3. JL
    February 9th, 2010 at 05:05 | #3

    I’ve seen different documentaries on the Illuminati, so I’m sure i will be able to catch your symbolism. I like the name Grand 13, I cant wait to read your story.

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