Freak Thoughts

I would like to use free energy in more detail than in the story I have posted. This may include refining this story in order to make it more believable. The miraculous elevator was said to be run through free energy but I did not do a thorough enough job of explaining how this technology is possible. Obviously the technology is more advanced than the admitted technology today because any device that might provide cheap energy would probably weigh down an elevator in these times. I need to explain how it was that technology had gotten this far or what characteristics of this other planet that exists in relation to potentials rather than actualities. I may choose to write a whole other story pertaining to free energy that might provide more detail. I want to write something that emphasizes the madness and genius of an inventor that has followed the path of Nikola Tesla and has translated it into their own modern energy science. This alarms the ‘global elite’ because it threatens their energy monopoly. This would be along the lines of a biography of a modern day Tesla. This time the people will win as I splice in my cheesy moral message that will detract ever so slightly (or largely depending on how I feel) from my piece. Yes, deal with it.
I really want to write about fantastic concepts, but my last two attempts have shown that I must go back and practice the basics of simplistic stories and examine the reasons for which they are sensical and believable. I have a tendency just to jump into the extraordinary and I sometimes leave readers in the dust. I will try to further develop my skills to make my works believable, but I also want to write about fantastic things as well.
Hopefully with this tale of a mad electrical experimentor/ inventor I can bring my stories back down to the earth and start with that point.
(My fiction writing is rusty. I haven’t completely finished a short story since high school I think – before these last two attempts)
I will try to make the piece more believable than my last two, but I still want to use technology that is more advanced than what is admitted currently. I will explain this man’s process of inventing and his inventions. His intention is to free mankind from the slavery of energy dependence and to provide free energy to every person on the planet.
The last piece I did was believable until the point that the free energy elevator just shot out of the guy’s house and went into outer space. I may choose to work with this piece to develop some alternate endings or to piece the fantastic events together to make them sensical and believable.
The story with the inventor will be helpful in bringing back my sense of the illusory cause and effect process.




I am using this guy for inspiration. I would like to progressively map his psychological processes while at the same time focusing on the vastness of the relevance of his (my character’s) realtion to the outside world.